Comments on: Like watching a movie

By: videos of forced sex

videos of forced sex — Mon, 20 Jul 2009 07:02:52 +0000

nice! i’m gonna make my own journal

By: Stephanie

Stephanie — Wed, 24 Jun 2009 00:09:34 +0000

Dialogue is my favorite! I love for my sense of humor to come through in it, too. My current WIP, Lost and Found, is dialogue driven, and it’s been so much fun to write! I love brooding, egotistical characters who have a strong heroine to bring them down a notch! Verbal sparring is so much fun and a great source of foreplay for a H/h!

By: Bethanne

Bethanne — Tue, 23 Jun 2009 03:31:27 +0000

Thanks for stopping in, Deb. Dialogue can definitely be difficult. Seeing it this way does help me create something more natural sounding.

By: Debora

Debora — Thu, 18 Jun 2009 12:35:58 +0000

Ack – I meant Bethanne – not Jenn….sorry Bethanne!

By: Debora

Debora — Thu, 18 Jun 2009 12:35:08 +0000

Well since in my last post I admitted I struggle with my dialogue – I love dialogue – I just have a hard time doing it

I love old movies and Jenn, you are so right about the dialogue sparkling in them. With the lack of special effects to carry the movies to that era, the dialogue and body language of the actors had to carry the whole shebang.

Maybe that’s another tool we can use as writers? Try to picture our characters on the big screen – all the movements, gestures and yes – the dialogue.

Interesting post!